Friday, July 01, 2011

Editorializing: what difference a few words make

From:

End your ATV ride at the shrine of Cagsawa Ruins, which are remnants of a Catholic Church built by the Spanish in the 18th century. 

To:

End your ATV ride at the shrine of Cagsawa Ruins, which are remnants of a Catholic Church ordered built by the Spanish friars in the 18th century.

Just giving credit to whom credit is due.


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thwany said...


i love words.

Jason said...


Lovefest -- so do I! :-D

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